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Chapter 2: The Russian Connection

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It's surprisingly intimidating to have to draw someone else's design of a secure facility - you don't want to accidentally add buildings that aren't supposed to be there! Luckily I didn't have to worry about colours given the noir dialogue, so I did the best I could given the one establishing shot Darke already drew on a previous page.

The final dialogue box on this page wasn't in the original script, but someone mentioned that it seemed a bit odd that despite being type-written Natalia's monologue is in broken English. It made sense to me that it was a transcript typed up from a recording, so I added it in here.

Natalia, Jess, Ai, X-MOW, GRACE and VIRTUE copyright © DarkeAngel.